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I’m alone in a crowded room
It spins around me
I’m losing control
The smiling mocking faces
Leering in and zooming away
My ears ringing
Everything swirling
And moving together
Blurring.

It feels like
The weight of the world
Is on my shoulders.
No one is listening
To my screaming,
Only laughter in my mind
I’ll take it all on alone.

I’ll rattle away
Into oblivion.
No one cares
About my words
My life.

I’ll disappear into
The swirling worldm,
The tornado
Outside my door.

Make it all go away.
Stand there screaming.
Total misery.

Is there more to life,
Why can’t I see?

Insanity, I’m blind.
©2004-2009 ~brideath
:iconbrideath:

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Listening to Metallica...Hmm...Inspirational music...yeah

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:iconprophet4289:
wo..that's just wo...it's really good..i can't completely relate but it cool...love the whole insainty, i'm blind part...it' rocks...laterdayz
:iconbrideath:
Thanks...I just wrote it in about 30 secs...not my best work but oh well...

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“Americans are so enamored of equality that they would rather be equal in slavery than unequal in freedom.”

-Alexis de Tocqueville
:iconprophet4289:
it's good keep it real
:iconbrideath:
laterdayz!

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“Americans are so enamored of equality that they would rather be equal in slavery than unequal in freedom.”

-Alexis de Tocqueville
:iconthedarkking:
GAMLING: You are our King, sire...
:iconbrideath:
LOTR!!!! YAY!!! :D

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“Americans are so enamored of equality that they would rather be equal in slavery than unequal in freedom.”

-Alexis de Tocqueville
:iconprophet4289:
hey that's my line...hehe
:iconbrideath:
HAHAHA!! Well now i stole it!! :devilish: LOL

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“Americans are so enamored of equality that they would rather be equal in slavery than unequal in freedom.”

-Alexis de Tocqueville
:icontsube:
sketchy poem! And as it is with all of your work, I absolutely love it. I get to feeling that way, sitting in my little room like all the shit around is closing in and I'm kinda lost in the middle. CALL ME!!!

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